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faster.
nature’s whirlwinds have wings – what happened to yours…
faster.
no miracles today are tomorrow’s closed doors…
faster.
tripped over the same old bump in the road…
faster.
what else was there waiting that you were not told…
Faster.
the clock ticks down to zero racing time…
Faster.
a piece of good fortune that cost only a dime…
Faster.
the alarm the light the shower the car the drive…
Faster.
the drive the car the house the cats i strive…
FASTER.
swirling around the breeze through my brain…
FASTER.
a flash from a scene never to be again…
FASTER.
the stare from the wall in front of you…
FASTER.
the mocking laughter from all around you…
FASTER.
what’s the meaning of this shipwrecked life…
FASTER.
another connection cut with the knife…
FASTER.
you’re slowing down you’re getting weak…
FASTER.
so out of breath you can’t even speak…
F A S T E R !
the tears are streaming down your cheeks…
F A S T E R !
the count goes on the days and weeks…
F A S T E R !
numbers all along a crooked path…
F A S T E R !
feel the hot whirlwinds of nature’s wrath…





wake up
xxx ooo

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Minia4 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovely............Love 
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ChasMandala Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay! Thanks again! :nod:
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Minia4 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My pleasure Hug 
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AMPSector Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Wow.. All I could feel was deep emotion with adrenaline. As I read each line, it felt as if I were chasing something, or even just trying to escape. Either way, there was a goal. And it became harder and harder to reach that goal. 
Very well written. Well done. :clap:
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ChasMandala Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you Sapphire :)  - yes, this was another piece of frustration I had to get out of me - I feel for that hamster on the treadmill :(
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AMPSector Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome - I most certainly hope you're feeling better. Just hang in there, continue to be strong. And your friends always here for you if you ever need them. ^^
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ChasMandala Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely - no worries Sweating a little...  - thanks for the reassurance.
This was kind of "a day in the life" vent - I find I feel better after getting it out of me; I'm sure you understand. :aww:
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AMPSector Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome. I am glad to know you are feeling better, I can understand. ^^
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ChasMandala Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sure thing - I hope you're feeling well also. :)
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AMPSector Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I'm okay, thank you. ^^
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